Nowdays, we are living in a society of highquality = high quality of education. Most of people are willing to give the best education to their kids. There are of course, a number of benefits to encourage a sense of competition to kids but also some problems caused by incorrect way. I would like to talk about these problems.
Due to the development of our society, competition is the most common thing around us. Comepetition = Competition is even essential for kids to live modern society. According to the BBC, most of children starts to have a competitive sense when they enter primary school. For example, students in Korea has a great desire at studin = in studying. They have a lot of academies after school paying a lot of money to learn faster than they learn at school. This bring a gap between other students to go to the famous university in seoul.
However, this can cause a negetive effect. As they focus on competition, they become selfish. They become careless and don't help others if it is about studing = studying. For instance, a student in Korea had iluminated his classmates textbook due to disturb him from studing = studying. This shows the bruial = brutal reality of competition.
In conclusion, encouraging competition has a good points but also has a negetive = negative effects. So in my opinion, it is essential that children should be taugh to co-operate = cooperate rather than competition.