The Witzenmann Ltd in Korea, has made versatile bellows.

But our main product is the bellows for an exhaust system.
= Perfect

I want to introduce what I usually do in my job postion.
I want to introduce what I usually do in my job position.

As you know, I am a new employee of design team in Witzennman Koea.
= As you know, I am a new employee of the design team in Witzennman Korea.

So, I don't have enough knowledge and qualification for to take part in the project .
= So, I don't have enough knowledge and qualification to take part in the project .

We must check the static and dynamic measurements before passing the product to the customer.
And I am going to talk about S&D measurments.
First, static measurements consist of axial, bending, lateral and torsion tests.
= Very good

The axial test is to check the stiffness,damping, tensility and compression for how much displacement will change.
= The axial test is done to check the stiffness, dampness, tensility and compression, for how much displacement will change.

The bending and lateral tests are also similar with axial test but it is different direction of force progression.
= The bending and lateral tests are also similar with the axial test but it is a different direction of force progression.

Therefore, there are three kinds of way to test static measurements aside from torsion test.
(For torsion tests, they are not normally examined)
= Therefore, there are three ways to test static measurements aside from the torsion test.
(For the torsion tests, they are not normally examined).
 

Hi Cole,


Your writing is getting better. Besides the few lapses on the article "the" and word forms, your sentence construction looks perfect. I am really amazed. Good job~!

Best regards,
Marie ^_^