Kim Yeon A
She from in Geong-Gi do Bu-Chun si. = She is from

 On 2003, she got member of the national team. = In 2003, she became a member of the National team.

She have a lot of medals. = She has

And she have a lot of honorary ambassador experience. = has

Now she will be Peong-Chang winnter Olympic honorary ambassador. = winter

But she doesn't work now. She retire. = She has retired.

Everyone love her and I still like her. (My father said I look like Kim Yeon A.) = loves

Park In Bee
She is the best of Golf. In last Olympic, =  best in golf. Last Olympic, she got a gold medal/ She got a gold medal in the last Olympic

 She got gold medal. So she is Korea's proud. = pride

Also She had a lot of awards. I think she is wonderful.

Son Yeon Ja
She is very cute and pretty! So I like her very much. She is inteligent, too. Because she went Yeon Se university.  = went to

So I every people love her.= every person loves

But said thing is she retired. = But many have said she is retired./Many were sad when she retired.

So I can't understand. She is still young. My mom said, she couldn't get medal in last Olympic. = in the last

So I think she is little poor.= a little poor

Above there, I love Son Yeon Ja the most. = Above all,/ Among I mentioned above..