제 목   How important do you think is friendship in someone's life?    상 태  
   작성자   dispel111    등록일   2017-02-22
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  Friendship plays a key role to live peacefully for everyone. Above all, it is one of the ways to settle a range of problems. Anytime you have a hard time, you might find yourself seeking your friend to seek comforts It seems like they can be much larger supports rather than their parents can do so because sometimes we're suffuring from our own worries which is really awkward to tell to our parents. A precondition to do so is a frendship. Therefore we always need to build a foundation for friendship. there is no doubt that friendship is essential for everyone, and how much you can rely on them is up to how much you regard them as precious. what you refer to and turn to is not far away.
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Friendship plays a key role for everyone to live peacefully. for everyone.
Above all, it is one of the ways to settle a range of problems.
Anytime you have a hard time, you might find yourself seeking your friend to seek comforts/to comfort you.[avoid redundancy]
It seems like they can be much larger supports rather=support you more effeciently than their=what your parents can do so because sometimes we're suffuring=we sometimes suffer from our own worries which is=are really awkward to tell to our parents.
A precondition to do so is to make a frendship. Therefore, we always need to build a foundation for friendship.
There is no doubt that friendship is essential for everyone, and how much you can rely on them is up to=on
how much you regard them as precious=preciously. [what you refer to and turn to is not far away.>???]
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