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   작성자   romantiysj0122    등록일   2017-02-17
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  People chase the beauty. fashion industry is the representative example. All of employee cater for beauty view point of people. This is the focus of market share. Under this stream. models are suffering from their agency. They are forced to get down their weight though loss their healthy. However, the responsibility is not to agency, but rather to human desire all players of fashion industry follow. Nowadays, thin and skinny body is standard of beauty. This is not made by fashion designer or agency. rather than they are loyal follower of this rule. I think they don't have a power to change the stream. If they try to change, I think they are took away from this industry. The key man is government and legislators. but they also don't have a power for changing. They just can protect the victims. They have to protect models who mess up their body to survive. banning agency force model to get down is bad idea. This is infeasible law. I think making minimum size proportional to their height is good way.
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People chase the beauty. = People chase beauty.

fashion industry is the representative example. = The fashion industry is the representative example.

All of employee cater for beauty view point of people.  = All employees cater to the beauty view point of people. 

This is the focus of market share.

Under this stream. models are suffering from their agency.  = Under this stream, models are suffering from their agency.

They are forced to get down their weight though loss their healthy. = They are forced to lose weight though it's unhealthy.
However, the responsibility is not to agency, but rather to human desire all players of fashion industry follow.  = However, the responsibility is not just on the agency, but rather on the human desire that all players of fashion industry follow. 

Nowadays, thin and skinny body is standard of beauty. = Nowadays, a thin and skinny body is the standard of beauty.

This is not made by fashion designer or agency. rather than they are loyal follower of this rule. = This is not made by fashion designers or agencies, rather they are loyal follower of this rule. 

I think they don't have a power to change the stream.  = I think they don't have power to change the stream.

If they try to change, I think they are took away from this industry. = If they try to change, I think they are removed from this industry.
The key man is government and legislators. but they also don't have a power for changing.  = The key man is the government and legislators but they also don't have power for changing.

They just can protect the victims. = They can just protect the victims.

They have to protect models who mess up their body to survive. banning agency force model to get down is bad idea.  = They have to protect models who mess up their body to survive. Banning agencies that force models to lose weight is a bad idea.

This is infeasible law. = This is infeasible to be made into a law. 

I think making minimum size proportional to their height is good way. = I think making their size proportional to their height is a good way.
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