I like to sleep anytime(,) anywhere. (Put the proper punctuation mark)

A sleep makes me to be refresh and it give me a strong energy.  =  Getting enough sleep makes me feel refreshed. It gives me high energy. 

So, When I was stressed by something. I sleep long time at that night.  =  So, when I am stressed, I sleep for a long time at night.

Then next day I feel better good and try to do something new. = When I wake up the next day, I can feel better and I am able to do something new.

And therefore I recommend you havIing a more sleeping! =  Therefore, I recommend you to get enough sleep.

Comment:

~ Thanks for your advice Jae-Beom. Yes, I will do that. Anyway, keep on improving! Study hard. :)