제 목   something that you want to learn more. (future)    상 태  
   작성자   dreamj007    등록일   2016-11-10
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  Swimming without a doubt would have to be the activity I would like to learn more. Since swimming has a lot of benefits to people’s health, It has become an important exercise to stay healthy. Last few days ago, I have read an eye-catching ad online that there is a particular event that a one indoor swimming pool nearby my home offers cheap lessons for people like me who don’t have enough time in the morning. So I am planning to learn it by enrolling in an evening swimming course. The gym has flexible schedules which are 3 sessions in the morning, in the afternoon and late at night. I will select the late at night schedule because I usually work in the morning and study IELTS in the afternoon. So it would be comfortable for me if I learn it at night. There are a couple of reasons why I would like to keep learning it. Swimming is not only a fun activity for my whole family but a great total workout as well. Because I need to move my whole body against the resistance of the water, It works practically all of the muscles in my body. Swimming is a healthy activity that my entire family can share. This low-impact sport can be enjoyed by me, my family and even my grandparents.
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Swimming without a doubt would have to be the (an) activity I would like to learn more.

Since swimming has a lot of benefits to people’s health, It (it) has become an important exercise to stay healthy.
Last few days ago, I have read an eye-catching ad online that there is a particular event that a one indoor swimming pool nearby my home offers cheap lessons for people like me who don’t have enough time in the morning. So I am planning to learn it by enrolling in an evening swimming course. = A few days ago, I have read an eye-catching ad online about a particular event. One indoor swimming pool nearby my home offers cheap lessons for people like me who don’t have enough time in the morning. So I am planning to learn it by enrolling in an evening swimming course. The gym has flexible schedules which (with) 3 sessions in the morning, in the afternoon and late at night. I will select the late at night = late night schedule because I usually work in the morning and study IELTS in the afternoon. So it would be comfortable for me if I learn it at night.

There are a couple of reasons why I would like to keep learning it.
Swimming is not only a fun activity for my whole family but a great total workout as well. Because I need to move my whole body against the resistance of the water, It works practically all of the muscles in my body. Swimming is a healthy activity that my entire family can share. This low-impact sport can be enjoyed by me, my family and even my grandparents.
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