제 목   Hi Nanette!    상 태  
   작성자   ekal4150    등록일   2016-10-26
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  nanett,do you remember about my request? about under the pressure? or stress! please don't forget about that! ^^ thank you! and this is the example what i changed after class. please check this also! Thank you for inviting me today for an interview. I’m so happy to get this opportunity. I majored in japanese business and english at Busan university of foreign studies. I chose my major to communicate with a variety of nationalities. because I really like meet people. I’m an outgoing person who has a positive attitude. I always think about everything in positiveside. Also i’m energetic because I do exercise everyday. my hobby is traveling and jogging. I went 15countries already. after travel, I learned about understanding of different culture. and another my strong point, i have many experiences in part time job related to sales promotion. Through these experiences i learned basic business skill of analysis and know the importance of cooperation. These things are not only my strong point but also it can be a great advantages to work in meltwater. I'm fully ready to prove my potential and make a great contribution with my co-worker at your company. THANK YOU.
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nanett,do you remember about my request? about under the pressure? or stress!
please don't forget about that! ^^ thank you!

and this is the example of what i changed after the class. please check this also!

Thank you for inviting me today for an interview.
I’m so happy to get this opportunity.
I majored in japanese business and english at Busan university of foreign studies.
I chose my major to communicate with a variety of nationalities. because I really like to meet people. I’m an outgoing person who has a positive attitude. I always think about everything in a positive side. Also i’m=I'm also energetic because I do exercise everyday. my hobby is traveling and jogging. I went to 15countries already. after travel=my trip, I learned about and understanding =understandof= about different culture. and another my strong point, i have many =are my experiences in part time job=jobs related to sales promotion. Through these experiences i learned basic business skill= skills of analysis and know the importance of cooperation. These things are not only my strong point but also it can be a great advantages= adbvantage to work in= at meltwater. I'm fully ready to prove my potential and make a great contribution with my co-worker=co-workers at your company. THANK YOU.
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