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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   dlagkscjd    µî·ÏÀÏ   2016-06-10
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  I had a long day. i've worked for half of a day and while we were working, we had a minor accident and that made one of peers sick off. So, i was the one to cover for her position. Dealing with a new work had me run rugged. Let me give you more details about the accident. There are some machines running around in circle. But the next thing you knew, the machins was out of control and crashed into a wall and made the workplace a whole mess. One of co-workers who worked very close to that gear was hurt a bit. A manager made her call it a day and pointed me as her cover-up. I was nervous about the accident happening again to me. It turned out that it didn't, but it kept me on my toe until i left work. Here is my last work of a day. I hate that manager who put me to that work!!!.
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I had a long day. i've = I've worked for half of a day and while we were working, we had a minor accident and that made one of peers sick off. =  we had a minor accident that made one of my peers sick. So, i = I was the one to cover for her position. Dealing with a new work had me run rugged. Let me give you more details about the accident. There are = were some machines running around in circle. But the next thing you knew, the machins was out of control = the machines went out of control  and crashed into a wall and made the workplace a whole mess. One of co-workers who worked very close to that gear was hurt a bit. = One of my co-workers who worked very close to that gear was hurt a bit. A manager made her call it a day and pointed me as her cover-up. I was nervous about the accident happening again to me. It turned out that it didn't, but it kept me on my toe until i left work. Here is my last work of a day. I hate that manager who put me to that work!!!.

 

NOTE:

1.) Be consistent with your tense. You used PAST TENSE since the beginning of your essay so make sure you continuously use the same tense. EXAMPLE: are = were

2.) Add personal pronouns when narrating a story specially if you are narrating it on your point if view or what we call 1st person point of view. EXAMPLE: One of co-workers who worked very close to that gear was hurt a bit. = One of my co-workers who worked very close to that gear was hurt a bit.

3.) Don't forget to write the pronoun "I" in capital letter. Example:  i've = I've ,  i = I 

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