I can say simply three words about the changed society by technology; fast, convenient and individual. The society has changed much faster than before. Simply we can see the speed of change through the cell phone we have how frequently changed and released, including cars, computers and appliances in house. With this fast change, I get a various selection of many product more suitable for me. And it also give me more convenience and satisfaction. But there is a critical bad thing caused by the convenient technology such as cell phone and computer. Nowadays if I want to buy something, I can order what I want on website without facing with people. We also can spend our time playing PC game alone at home on holiday . The time that being alone has increased. We rarely need neighbor’s help because that we can get most of necessities on internet. So now let’s think whether you know your neighbor or not even in next-door of you.

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