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  The most important reasons for my thinking this way is that starting school day late in the morning can reduce students¡¯ stress. These days, Students are too much stressed out due to the tremendous workload they have to cope with. Stress is closely related and often leads to the health problem. Thus, it is worse for students to start school day early in the morning, because they will receive additional stress. This reminds me of a time when I was a freshmen in high school. I struggled from getting up early because I really liked to do anything at night. I could focus on studying and doing assignments well at night, so I always went to bed lately after doing that. Thus, I received so much stress every morning because I should go to my school early due the its policy. As the stress was serious, I had to be treated at the hospital for 2 months because of a stomach ulcer. This example clearly shows that starting early in the morning is worse for student because of stress.
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The most important reasons for my thinking this way is that starting school day late in the morning can reduce students’ stress.  = I think starting school day late in the morning can reduce students' stress. These days, Students are too much stressed out due to the tremendous workload they have to cope with. = These days, students are too stressed out due to the tremendous workload they have to cope with. Stress is closely related and often leads to the health problem. = Stress is closely related and often leads to health problems. Thus, it is worse for students to start school day early in the morning, because they will receive additional stress.  = Thus, it is bad for students to start school day early in the morning because they will receive additional stress. This reminds me of a time when I was a freshmen in high school. I struggled from getting up early because I really liked to do anything at night. = I struggled from getting up early because I really liked to do things at night. I could focus on studying and doing assignments well at night, so I always went to bed lately after doing that. = I could focus on studying and doing assignments well at night, so I always went to bed late. Thus, I received so much stress every morning because I should go to my school early due the its policy.  = Thus, I received so much stress every morning because I had to go to my school early due its policy. As the stress was serious, I had to be treated at the hospital for 2 months because of a stomach ulcer. = As the stress got worse, I had to be treated at the hospital for 2 months because of a stomach ulcer. This example clearly shows that starting early in the morning is worse for student because of stress. = This example clearly shows that starting early in the morning is really bad for students because of the stress it might cause.

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