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The most important reasons for my thinking this way is that starting school day late in the morning can reduce students’ stress. = I think starting school day late in the morning can reduce students' stress. These days, Students are too much stressed out due to the tremendous workload they have to cope with. = These days, students are too stressed out due to the tremendous workload they have to cope with. Stress is closely related and often leads to the health problem. = Stress is closely related and often leads to health problems. Thus, it is worse for students to start school day early in the morning, because they will receive additional stress. = Thus, it is bad for students to start school day early in the morning because they will receive additional stress. This reminds me of a time when I was a freshmen in high school. I struggled from getting up early because I really liked to do anything at night. = I struggled from getting up early because I really liked to do things at night. I could focus on studying and doing assignments well at night, so I always went to bed lately after doing that. = I could focus on studying and doing assignments well at night, so I always went to bed late. Thus, I received so much stress every morning because I should go to my school early due the its policy. = Thus, I received so much stress every morning because I had to go to my school early due its policy. As the stress was serious, I had to be treated at the hospital for 2 months because of a stomach ulcer. = As the stress got worse, I had to be treated at the hospital for 2 months because of a stomach ulcer. This example clearly shows that starting early in the morning is worse for student because of stress. = This example clearly shows that starting early in the morning is really bad for students because of the stress it might cause.
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