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   작성자   myam    등록일   2015-09-30
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  1. 2. 3.He was detained for several hours before authorities realized that what Ahmed had made was just a clock. 4.Within hours of his being released it take hours after releasing his custody 5. he want to be a kids of enterprice about the science. 6. maybe perception about muslims was able to make this happening. because during few century, a little of them did such a things like terror. 7. although he was not guilty, he still has called bomb maker. 8.To add insult to injury, his school suspended him for three days 9.Twitter offered him an internship 10.Mark Zuckerberg
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3.He was detained for several hours before authorities realized that what Ahmed had made was just a clock. = no corrections required
4.Within hours of his being released it take hours after releasing his custody  = Within hours of his being released, his story went viral.

5. he want to be a kids of enterprice about the science. = He wants to inspire the kids to like science

6. maybe perception about muslims was able to make this happening because during few century, a little of them did such a things like terror.
. = Ahmed's arrest has once again put the spotlight in the USA on the issue of Islamophobia and of how Muslims are perceived and treated

7. although he was not guilty, he still has called bomb maker. = It made him feel like he was a criminal and a terrorist.
8.To add insult to injury, his school suspended him for three days = He was suspended for three days
 9.Twitter offered him an internship = no correction required
10.Mark Zuckerberg = Facebook creator Mark Zuckerberg said: "The future belongs to people like Ahmed."
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