I think I'm not a perfect duaghter to my parents. First, I have a lot of weakness.
Well, I think I can do sports or studying well enough to catch up with other friends.
However I couldn't draw well, I'm always shy to other people, and I'm not good at spending and planning tims well.

Second, I think my charicteristic is lazy and I just do things that I like.
For instance, I like resting, reading a book, watching my phone, and chatting with my friends.
I try to do juat what I prefer, so it makes me lazy. However, I'm trying to fix my personalities like that.

Of course, I want to be a perfect daughter. However, as a human, I have weakness too.
In adition, I easily be lazy because of my instinct. I am not good at spending time efficently.
Therefore I think I'm not a perfect daughter to my parents. But I will try my best to improve myself.

I think I'm not a perfect daughter to my parents. First, I have a lot of weaknesses. Well, I think I can do sports or study well enough to catch up with other friends. However, I couldn't draw well, I'm always shy around other people, and I'm not good at spending and planning time well.

Second, I think I am lazy, and I just do things that I like. For instance, I like resting, reading a book, looking at my phone, and chatting with my friends. I try to do only what I prefer, so it makes me lazy. However, I'm trying to fix my personality traits like that. Of course, I want to be a perfect daughter. However, as a human, I have weaknesses too.

In addition, I easily become lazy because of my instinct. I am not good at spending time efficiently. Therefore, I think I'm not a perfect daughter to my parents. But I will try my best to improve myself.

Note: I underlined the corrections I made. Good job, Kayla. Keep it up!