제 목   My hoilday!    상 태  
   작성자   hani921    등록일   2026-09-28
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  My hoilday it so fun! I meet my grandma,grandpa and my parent. And I went to the Ock-cheon. I see many bugs. And I went to the Goesan and Miwon. I ate kalguksu.
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CORRECTED SENTENCES:

My hoilday it so fun! = My hoilday was so fun!
I meet my grandma,grandpa and my parent. = I met my grandparents with my parents.
And I went to the Ock-cheon. = We went to Okcheon
I see many bugs. = I saw many bugs.
And I went to the Goesan and Miwon. = Then we went to Goesan and Miwon.
I ate kalguksu.
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