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I think that some people are natural leaders and some are natural followers because personality is likely to determine these characteristics.
I think that the environment could determine people's characteristics and decide whether they should be a leader or a follower.
So I think it is usually naturally decided, but because of the environment, there could be an exception. = think some people are natural leaders while others are natural followers because their personalities are likely to determine these characteristics. I also think that the environment can influence people's characteristics and determine whether they become leaders or followers. So, I think these roles are usually determined naturally, but there can be exceptions depending on a person's environment.
CORRECTIONS:
- some are natural followers = others are natural followers
→ The pattern some... while others... sounds more natural.
- personality is likely to determine = their personalities are likely to determine
→ More natural because you're talking about different people's personalities.
- could determine = can influence
→ Influence is more appropriate because the environment affects personality rather than completely determining it.
- decide whether they should be a leader or a follower = determine whether they become leaders or followers
→ More natural and avoids the idea that someone should be a leader.
- naturally decided = determined naturally
→ More natural word order.
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