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  I think communication is important for a healthy relationship. Human can talk with other people and show their expressions. Socratas and Platon insisted the importance of communication skills and I agree with them too. Also, respect plays a crucial role in a healthy realationship. When I was respected by other people, it felt good and I wanted to be closer with someome who had respected me. Being respected is like a compliment. There is a Korean proverb called "Praise makes even a whale dance." Hearing a compliment makes us happy. That is why being praised ans respected by other people is crucial in healthy realationship.
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I think communication is important for a healthy relationship.
Human can talk with other people and show their expressions.
Socratas and Platon insisted the importance of communication skills and I agree with them too.

Also, respect plays a crucial role in a healthy realationship.
When I was respected by other people, it felt good and I wanted to be closer with someome who had respected me.
Being respected is like a compliment. There is a Korean proverb called "Praise makes even a whale dance."
Hearing a compliment makes us happy. That is why being praised ans respected by other people is crucial in healthy realationship.

 

I think communication is important for a healthy relationship.
Humans can talk with other people and express their feelings.
Socrates and Plato insisted on the importance of communication skills, and I agree with them too.

Also, respect plays a crucial role in a healthy relationship.
When I am respected by other people, it feels good, and I want to be closer to someone who respects me.
Being respected is like a compliment. There is a Korean proverb that says, Praise makes even a whale dance.
Hearing a compliment makes us happy. That is why being praised and respected by other people is crucial in a healthy relationship.

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