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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   leemi0    µî·ÏÀÏ   2026-07-24
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  I think we have not become obsessed with technology because technology has made our lives more and more convenient. Technology enables people to send emails faster than ever, and by using things like AI, we can be able to make reports and do calculations. So I think we are not obsessed with technology.
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I think we have not become obsessed with technology because technology has made our lives more and more convenient.
Technology enables people to send emails faster than ever, and by using things like AI, we can be able to make reports and do calculations.
So I think we are not obsessed with technology. =
 I don't think we have become obsessed with technology because it has made our lives more convenient. Technology enables people to send emails faster than ever, and by using tools like AI, we can make reports and do calculations more easily. So, I don't think we are obsessed with technology.

 

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You did a great job explaining your opinion and giving good reasons to support it. Your ideas were organized, and it was easy to follow your writing from the beginning to the end. To improve, practice making your sentences sound more natural by avoiding extra words like "can be able to" and choosing simpler expressions. Also, try using different linking words and sentence patterns to make your writing more interesting. Keep up the great work!
 

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