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  We usually take a walk or go preaching! Sometimes we also go on a trip! Like water park, amusement park, sometimes we go to grandparents house too! "The men who minister in a fine manner are acquiring for themselves a fine standing and great freeness of speech in the faith.​" — 1 Timothy 3:13
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We usually take a walk or go preaching!
Sometimes we also go on a trip!
Like water park, amusement park, sometimes we go to grandparents house too!

"The men who minister in a fine manner are acquiring for themselves a fine standing and great freeness of speech in the faith.​" — 1 Timothy 3:13

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We usually take a walk or go preaching!
Sometimes we also go on a trip!
Like a water park, an amusement park, or sometimes we go to my grandparents' house too!

"Like water park, amusement park" is missing articles. In English, singular countable nouns usually need an article ("a" or "the").
"grandparents house" should be "my grandparents' house" if you're talking about your own grandparents. It also needs the apostrophe to show possession.
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