This is a really hard question!!
Curly hair is cute, and straight hair is cool!
Both are nice, but if I have to choose one, I will choose straight hair!
Curly hair easily gets frizzy.
People like me, who likes to keep their hair easily tidy, will think same with me.
But some day, maby when I become an adult, I want to try curly and short hair!

"I, Jehovah, am searching the heart . . . to give to each one according to his ways.​" — Jeremiah 17:10
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This is a really hard question!!
Curly hair is cute, and straight hair is cool!
Both are nice, but if I have to choose one, I would choose straight hair!
Curly hair easily gets frizzy.
People like me, who like to keep their hair easily tidy, will think the same.
But someday, maybe when I become an adult, I want to try short, curly hair!
= "Would" sounds more natural when talking about a hypothetical choice.
= People is plural, so we can use like.
= Someday is one word when it means "at some point in the future."
= In English, adjectives usually follow the order size/length → texture, so short, curly hair sounds more natural than curly and short hair.
= Great job!