Hmm, she is a nice girl!
She is taller than me.
She has black long straight hair and black eyes!
She likes to wear jeans, and T-shirts!
She wears glasses! And she usually doesn’t wear accessories!

“God is not unrighteous so as to forget your work and the love you showed for his name by ministering and continuing to minister to the holy ones.​” — Hebrews 6:10

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Hmm, she is a nice girl!
She is taller than me.
She has long, straight black hair and black eyes!
She likes to wear jeans and T-shirts!
She wears glasses! And she usually doesn’t wear accessories!
= In English, adjectives usually follow a specific order. For hair, the natural order is length → shape → color → noun, so long, straight black hair sounds correct. 
=  A comma is generally used only when listing three or more items.
= Overall, you did great!