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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   leemi0    µî·ÏÀÏ   2026-06-08
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  I like to listen to 'Melon chart' because it contains various songs that are popular nowadays. I like to listen to those songs because famous songs are likely to be good songs, and good songs make me calm and cozy inside. So I like to listen to 'Melon chart' when I have free time.
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I like to listen to listening to the 'Melon chart' because it contains various songs=  a variety of that are popular nowadays.
I like to listen to those songs because famous= popular songs are likely to be good songs, and good songs make me calm and cozy inside.= feel calm and cozy.
So I like to listen to 'Melon chart' when I have free time.

Evaluation: Your writing is clear and easy to understand. Be careful with word choice and natural expressions, such as using "popular songs" instead of "famous songs." However, you did a good job explaining your reasons and organizing your ideas. Great job, Kevin!

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