I usually meet my friends in my hometown. Because I live with my parents in my hometown,= because I live with my parents there, and some of my friends also live in neighborhoods.= in nearby neighborhoods.  We meet regularly and do some stuff. = some activities together. Currently, we meet in= at a local cafe for having an= to have an Admin night (or afternoon). An admin night is one of= one of the popular social trends in Korea, instead of spending money on alcohol, or socializing events. My friends and I usually hang out in the afternoon. My friends are searching for their jobs and preparing for the applications.=  for jobs and preparing their applications. In my case, I usually write articles and search= look for the part-time jobs to save money. We love doing this activity because we could= can  cheer each other up.

Evaluation: Your paragraph is very good because it clearly explains your routine and your friendship activities. You also included interesting cultural information about “admin night,” which makes your writing engaging and meaningful. However, try to improve grammar consistency (like verb forms and sentence structure) and avoid repetition. Also, some phrases can be simplified for clearer and more natural English. Keep writing like this, Demi! You are expressing your ideas well, and with small grammar improvements, your writing will become even more natural and confident. Great effort!