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  My best gift is computer. I was gruate high school, my father gives me the computer. My family were had computer but that is very slowly. Sometimes it makes me mad. He said "Do study more and do little paly the game" and gave it. But i can't do it. It is defficult for me. I palyed game a lot and do study little. But it hasn't just disadventage. It has good thing. I can well deal with computer( hard ware and soft ware). Nowday my family ask me something problem or when they buy computer.
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My best gift is computer. = The best gift I have ever received was a computer. 
I was gruate high school, my father gives me the computer. = My father gave me a computer on my high school graduation. / It was my graduation gift from my father.
My family were had computer but that is very slowly. Sometimes it makes me mad. = My family already had a computer at that time but it was very slow and  sometimes made me mad when  I was using it.
He said "Do study more and do little paly the game" and gave it. = My father said, "study more and play a little".  But i can't = I couldn't  do it. It is = It was defficult for me. I palyed game a lot and do study little. = I ended up doing the oppossite. I played more and studied less. 

But it hasn't just disadventage. It has good thing. = But, it wasn't all bad for me. It had its advantages. 
I can well deal with computer( hard ware and soft ware). = Because of it, I can use the computer well. 
Nowday my family ask me something problem or when they buy computer. = Nowadays, when my family is having a computer problem, they always ask me to help them. 

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