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When I am bored, I usually study or do my homework because I feel relaxed when I do so.
I sometimes hang out with my friends or do= play boardgames wih my family.
By doing that, I can be more delighted.= By doing these activities, I feel happier and more relaxed.
Evaluation: Your ideas are clear and you explain well what you do when you are bored. To improve, you should use more natural word choices like “play board games” and “feel happier” instead. However, your writing is good, and with a few vocabulary improvements, it will sound more natural and fluent. Keep it up! |