I like rollercoaster!
Because, I don't know why but other rides are kind a scary...
Especially pirate ship is extremely scary!!
But rollercoaster feels okay!
And also the speed and the wind feels really great:)

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I like rollercoasters!
Because, I don't know why, but other rides are kind of scary.
Especially, the pirate ship is extremely scary!!
But rollercoaster feels okay!
And also the speed and the wind feel really great:)

= "rollercoasters" is better to talk about general things
= kind of scary or kinda scary 
= Good job!