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  My hometown is in Inchean. I haved live here for 4~5 years. I live in Lu-1 city. I live in an apartment on fourth floor. near my apartment, there are a school, playgrounds, many academies, cafes or restaurants, stores. I go to English academy named EIE. I love to eat delicious things in a convenience store, and play with my friends on a playground. I usally play with them on weekend! I don't want to move to another city or town. I think my city is very comfortable! I love our town! thanks you for reading!
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My hometown is in Inchean. I haved live here for 4~5 years. I live in Lu-1 city. I live in an apartment on fourth floor. near my apartment, there are a school, playgrounds, many academies, cafes or restaurants, stores. I go to English academy named EIE. I love to eat delicious things in a convenience store, and play with my friends on a playground. I usally play with them on weekend! I don't want to move to another city or town. I think my city is very comfortable! I love our town! thanks you for reading!

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My hometown is Incheon. I have lived here for 4–5 years. I live in Lu-1 City. I live in an apartment on the fourth floor.

Near my apartment, there is a school, playgrounds, many academies, cafés, restaurants, and stores. I go to an English academy called EIE.

I love eating delicious food from the convenience store and playing with my friends at the playground. I usually play with them on weekends.

I don’t want to move to another city or town because I think my city is very comfortable. I love my town!

Thank you for reading!

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