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Can you share a fairytale that comes from your country? What is its main theme, and how does the story unfold?
When I was young °¾ÆÁö¶Ë is very famouse in Korea. °¾ÆÁö¶Ë is dog`s poop.
I don`t remember it well, it story is dog make a poop and many animals hate the poop. beacause smells bad and dirty.
So poop was very sad. but the poop hug one dandlion seed and poop melted many days later. and there grow one dandlion flower. |
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Can you share a fairytale that comes from your country? What is its main theme, and how does the story unfold?
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When I was young °¾ÆÁö¶Ë is very famouse in Korea. = When I was young, °¾ÆÁö¶Ë was very famous in Korea. why: Add comma after “young,” change verb tense (“is” → “was”), correct spelling (“famouse” → “famous”).
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°¾ÆÁö¶Ë is dog`s poop. = °¾ÆÁö¶Ë means dog’s poop. why: Use “means” for definition, correct apostrophe (“dog’s”).
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I don`t remember it well, it story is dog make a poop and many animals hate the poop. = I don’t remember it well. The story is about a dog’s poop, and many animals hate the poop. why: Split run‑on sentence, add “about” for clarity, correct verb form (“dog make” → “dog’s poop”).
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beacause smells bad and dirty. = Because it smells bad and dirty. why: Correct spelling (“beacause” → “because”), add subject “it.”
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So poop was very sad. = So the poop was very sad. why: Add article “the” for natural phrasing.
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but the poop hug one dandlion seed and poop melted many days later. = But the poop hugged a dandelion seed, and it melted many days later. why: Correct verb tense (“hug” → “hugged”), add article “a,” correct spelling (“dandlion” → “dandelion”), add subject “it.”
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and there grow one dandlion flower. = And a dandelion flower grew there. why: Correct verb tense (“grow” → “grew”), add article “a,” correct spelling (“dandlion” → “dandelion”).
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