What’s the most expensive thing you’ve broken?

• When i was 23 years old, i bought new motocycle. = When I was 23 years old, I bought a new motorcycle. why: Capitalize “I,” add article “a,” correct spelling (“motocycle” → “motorcycle”).

• it was about 5000 dollores and very very exepencive for me at that time. = It was about 5,000 dollars and very, very expensive for me at that time. why: Capitalize “It,” correct spelling (“dollores” → “dollars,” “exepencive” → “expensive”), add comma in “very, very.”

• 5 months later, I went to the workplace eraly morning by that motocycle, some car hit me. = Five months later, I went to my workplace early in the morning on that motorcycle, and a car hit me. why: Spell out numbers in writing, correct spelling (“eraly” → “early”), use “on” for transportation, fix run‑on sentence.

• It isn`t my fault. so I received fixing fee and sugery fee. = It wasn’t my fault, so I received repair fees and surgery fees. why: Use correct contraction (“wasn’t”), combine sentences smoothly, correct spelling (“sugery” → “surgery”), use natural terms (“repair fees”).

• but I lost my time. = But I lost my time. why: Capitalize “But.” Sentence is grammatically correct but could be more natural depending on meaning.