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In the story Peter Pan, the Lost Boys were taken to Neverland, where they stayed young forever. If y |
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net0112 |
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In the story Peter Pan, the Lost Boys were taken to Neverland, where they stayed young forever. If you were one of Peter Pan’s friends, would you also want to remain a child forever? Why or why not?
I don`t want stayed childe forever. but I want stayed young adult forever.
Because, underage have a lot of limits and they need care of their parents. it`s not good for me. |
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I don`t want stayed childe forever. = I don’t want to stay a child forever. why: Use “to stay” (correct verb form), correct spelling (“child”), remove past tense “stayed.”
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but I want stayed young adult forever. = But I want to stay a young adult forever. why: Capitalize “But,” use “to stay,” add article “a.”
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Because, underage have a lot of limits and they need care of their parents. = Because minors have a lot of limitations, and they need the care of their parents. why: “Underage” is not used as a noun; use “minors,” improve phrasing, add article “the.”
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it`s not good for me. = It’s not good for me. why: Capitalize the first letter; sentence is otherwise correct.
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