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  Imagine you could stay the same age forever—what age would you pick, and why? I`ll pick 22years old. I was very health and young also finished army that time. I think I stated surf and table tennis to late. If who start to late them, change muscle memory is not easy to old man. so I want try them when I was young and health.
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Imagine you could stay the same age forever—what age would you pick, and why?

  • I`ll pick 22years old. = I’ll pick 22 years old. why: Add a space between “22” and “years,” correct formatting.

  • I was very health and young also finished army that time. = I was very healthy and young, and I had also finished the army at that time. why: “health” → “healthy,” add conjunction for clarity, adjust verb tense (“had finished”).

  • I think I stated surf and table tennis to late. = I think I started surfing and table tennis too late. why: “stated” → “started,” add “surfing” (correct form), “too late” (correct spelling and meaning).

  • If who start to late them, change muscle memory is not easy to old man. = If someone starts too late, changing muscle memory is not easy for an older person. why: Rewrite for clarity, correct grammar (“someone,” “starts,” “too late”), “for an older person” is natural phrasing.

  • so I want try them when I was young and health. = So I wanted to try them when I was young and healthy. why: Add “to” after “want,” correct tense (“wanted”), “health” → “healthy.”

 
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