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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   dnjswjd282    µî·ÏÀÏ   2025-11-28
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  I think watching movies is better for learning English. When a person starts studying, consistency is the most important. However, reading English books is hard to do everyday as I have to read it on my own. I think it is appropriate for someone who already has studied English for a long time or wants to know the deeper information. Watching movies is much better for consistency because it is easier than reading books. But it is more helpful to watch moives without subtitles.
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However, reading English books is hard to do everyday as I have to read it on my own. = However, reading English books is hard to do every day because I have to read them on my own.
“everyday” = “every day” (adverb form); “it” = “them” (books = plural); “as” = “because” sounds more natural.

I think it is appropriate for someone who already has studied English for a long time = I think it is appropriate for someone who has studied English for a long time.
 Removed “already” because it’s unnecessary.

or wants to know the deeper information. = or wants to learn deeper information.
 “know” = “learn” fits better; removed “the” to sound natural.

But it is more helpful to watch moives without subtitles. = But it is more helpful to watch movies without subtitles.
 “moives” = “movies” (spelling).

Great job! Your writing is clear and your ideas make sense. Just a few small corrections with spelling and wording. Keep going!

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