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However, reading English books is hard to do everyday as I have to read it on my own. = However, reading English books is hard to do every day because I have to read them on my own.
“everyday” = “every day” (adverb form); “it” = “them” (books = plural); “as” = “because” sounds more natural.
I think it is appropriate for someone who already has studied English for a long time = I think it is appropriate for someone who has studied English for a long time.
Removed “already” because it’s unnecessary.
or wants to know the deeper information. = or wants to learn deeper information.
“know” = “learn” fits better; removed “the” to sound natural.
But it is more helpful to watch moives without subtitles. = But it is more helpful to watch movies without subtitles.
“moives” = “movies” (spelling).
Great job! Your writing is clear and your ideas make sense. Just a few small corrections with spelling and wording. Keep going! |