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Homework: Do you exercise often?

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I'm exercising once a week.
Actually Actually, I didn't use to exercise. But these day I'm doing = days I'm doing it because if I don't exercise my body hard and fall = hard, I'll lose physical strength.
So I try.
Exercise is hard = hard, but I feel proud after exercise.

Good day, Bailey! Once a week of exercise is not bad at all, rather than not doing so. Thank you for sharing such a thoughtful response. In addition, correcting subject-verb agreement and maintaining consistent verb tenses are the main ways to improve the grammatical structure. Watch out for the proper use of punctuation marks like "commas (,)." You can do this. Keep going, Bailey!

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