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I’d like to travel to Antarctica someday.
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I love winter and nature.
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I could see the combination of extreme winter and nature there. = I could experience the combination of extreme winter and nature there. Why: “Experience” is more natural than “see” when describing travel.
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If I get married someday, I want to travel to Antarctica for honeymoon. = If I get married someday, I want to travel to Antarctica for my honeymoon. Why: Added “my” for grammatical correctness.
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I’ve actually had no idea about it. = I actually had no idea about it. Why: Present perfect “I’ve had” is awkward here; simple past “I had” fits better.
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But as soon as I heard this question, I decided to do. = But as soon as I heard this question, I decided to go. Why: “Do” is incorrect; “go” matches the travel context.
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Now I look it up, all contents are about cruise trip, and they are so expensive. = Now that I’ve looked it up, all the information is about cruise trips, and they are very expensive. Why: “Look it up” corrected to present perfect “I’ve looked it up”; “contents” changed to “information”; “cruise trip” pluralized.
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I’ve never imagined the travel to Antarctica is such a luxurious item. = I never imagined that traveling to Antarctica would be such a luxury. Why: Rephrased for fluency; “luxury” is more natural than “luxurious item.”
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I should work harder to earn more money.
