What is the most picture-worthy place in Korea? Describe the place.

• I think the most picture-worthy place in Korea is Nam-San. (Correct as-is)

• Nam-San is the small mountain located in center of Seoul city that capital of the Korea. = Nam-San is a small mountain located in the center of Seoul, the capital of Korea. Why: Added articles “a” and “the”; rephrased for smoother sentence structure.

• Top of the Nam-San, there is Nam-San Tower that height is 244 meters. = At the top of Nam-San, there is Nam-San Tower, which is 244 meters tall. Why: Rephrased for fluency; “which is” introduces the height more naturally.

• there are shopping mall, restarents, sky lounge in the Nam-San Tower. = There are a shopping mall, restaurants, and a sky lounge in Nam-San Tower. Why: Added articles; corrected spelling of “restaurants”; used “and” for listing.

• Touris can ride a cable car when they go up and down. = Tourists can ride a cable car to go up and down. Why: Corrected spelling of “touris”; simplified phrasing for clarity.

• Seoul is one of the big city in the world but few high buldings. = Seoul is one of the biggest cities in the world, but it has few tall buildings. Why: “Biggest cities” is the correct superlative form; “tall buildings” is clearer than “high.”

• It means t you can see the Seoul city widely even Nam-San and Nam-San Tower is not high. = This means you can see a wide view of Seoul even though Nam-San and its tower are not very tall. Why: Rephrased for clarity and grammar; corrected “t” to “you”; “wide view” is more natural.

• There are many things for tourist, not only facilities but also traditional performance. = There are many things for tourists, including facilities and traditional performances. Why: “Tourists” should be plural; “including” improves sentence flow; “performances” should be plural.

• But the most wonderful thing is view of the Seoul. = But the most wonderful thing is the view of Seoul. Why: Added article “the”; removed “the” before “Seoul” for natural phrasing.

• Night wiew on the Nam-San Tower is very beautiful. = The night view from Nam-San Tower is very beautiful. Why: Corrected spelling of “view”; “from” is the correct preposition.

• So the top restaurant of the tower is very poupular place to young couple even expensive food price. = That’s why the top restaurant in the tower is very popular with young couples, even though the food is expensive. Why: Rephrased for fluency; corrected spelling of “popular”; “with young couples” is the correct phrasing.

• If tourists visit Nam-San, I gurantee a good memory of the Korea. = If tourists visit Nam-San, I guarantee they’ll have a great memory of Korea. Why: Corrected spelling of “guarantee”; “they’ll have a great memory” is more natural; removed “the” before “Korea.”