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  I am a really adventurous person related to food because I like to explore new food in the world. I always want to try other country's food and I'm very curious about the recipe or the way of cooking they have. Food is very fascinating when it comes to look into it.
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I am a really adventurous person related to food because I like to explore new food in the world. = I am a really adventurous person when it comes to food because I like to explore new dishes from around the world.
“related to food” → “when it comes to food”; “new food in the world” → “new dishes from around the world” sounds more natural.

I always want to try other country's food and I'm very curious about the recipe or the way of cooking they have. = I always want to try food from other countries, and I’m very curious about their recipes and cooking methods.
“other country's food” → “food from other countries”; “the recipe or the way of cooking they have” → “their recipes and cooking methods” (simpler and correct plural).

Food is very fascinating when it comes to look into it. = Food is very fascinating when you take a closer look at it.
“when it comes to look into it” → “when you take a closer look at it” (natural phrasing).

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