Globalization connects cultures but can also erase traditions. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages? Explain.

Yes, I think that = the benefits of globalization are more than disadvatnages = outweigh the disadvantages.
Everything has both sides containing pros and cons, so globalization is also the same = advantages and disadvantages, and globalization is no exception.
We live in one world and the boundary of each countires disappear. = where the boundaries between countries are disappearing.
Globalization plays a crucial role in connecting most countries and cultures in this situation.
We are experiencing other cultures through globalization, therefore = globalization; therefore, we can understand each other.
Plus, by knowing well and having an interest in every event in the world, the unfairness of the past could be solved.
For instance, there are a war, poverty, a crime, and other problems.
Of course, disadvantages exist, for instance undermining traditions. = For instance, issues such as war, poverty, and crime can be dealt with through international cooperation. Of course, globalization also has disadvantages, such as undermining traditional cultures.
But I believe that indigenous traditions have become rather famous, because = famous because of globalizition = globalization.
Nowadays, we explore a diverse world by overcoming the impossibility of the past.

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