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Why do you think some people are afraid of flying? |
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kc7339 |
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I think people are afraid of feelings that they are floating in the air. They don't stand on the ground with their feet. Also, they are worried about their safety while flying. They are open to the various news about accidents during flying and it makes them terrified about flying. |
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- I think people are afraid of feelings that they are floating in the air. = I think people are afraid of the feeling that they are floating in the air.
“feelings” → “the feeling” (singular, specific feeling).
- They don't stand on the ground with their feet. = They don't feel like they are standing on the ground.
“with their feet” is unnecessary; “feel like” makes it natural.
- Also, they are worried about their safety while flying. = Also, they are worried about their safety when flying.
“while” → “when” is more natural in this context.
- They are open to the various news about accidents during flying and it makes them terrified about flying. = They are exposed to various news about flying accidents, and it terrifies them.
“open to the news” → “exposed to the news”; “makes them terrified about flying” → “it terrifies them” (simpler and more natural).
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