제 목   How do people in your country usually celebrate birthdays?    상 태  
   작성자   gocamping    등록일   2025-09-11
   원 문
  When people are in their 20’s, they want to make birthday parties as mush as possible. They love being center of attention from others. Some people have a lot of appointments so they spend almost a month celebrating their birthday. I think this is because people in their 20's are more energetic and relationships are very important for their life. Moreover, they have enough time to celebrate it and their friends also same. However, recently I have been sending celebrating message and a mobile gift voucher to birthday person online. (If the birthday person is older then I will call them)
   내 용
 

When people are in their 20’s, they want to make = have birthday parties as mush = much as possible. They love being the center of attention from others. (remove these words)

Some people have a lot of appointments so they spend almost a month celebrating their birthday.

I think this is because people in their 20's are more energetic and relationships are very important for = in their life. Moreover, they have enough time to celebrate it and their friends also same. = do as well / they have a lot of time to celebrate, and so do their friends.

However, recently I have been sending celebrating message = birthday messages and a mobile gift voucher to birthday = to the person online. (If the birthday person = birthday celebrant is older then I will call them)
   이전글 hw: 9/2 & 9/5
   다음글 Are you popular? Why or why not? Would you like to be?