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  Do you think people should always follow tradition, or is it okay to break away from it? Explain your view. I believe that we can break away from our tradition. Tradition is a combination of wisdom in the past. It means that people live as following wisdom to bring convenience. But we face so many change by development of science and technology. The way following new wisdom is sensible in terms of efficiency. If someone shouldn't accept new wisdom, it will be culled in our society. However, it is different when we talk about the attitude of life. This is called etiqutette, that is essential lesson to learn when everyone is children. I believe that we should follow etiqutette tradition. Because it is agreement by people to respect each other. We can't easily break previous agreemnet, even though youger want. Thank you for reading!
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Do you think people should always follow tradition, or is it okay to break away from it? Explain your view.

I believe that we can break away from our tradition.
Tradition is a combination of wisdom in = from the past.
It means that people live as = by following wisdom to bring convenience.
But we face so many change by = changes due to the development of science and technology.
The way following = Following the way new wisdom is sensible in terms of efficiency. / Using new ideas makes sense because it helps us do things more easily and quickly.
If someone shouldn't = doesn't accept new wisdom, it will be culled in our society. / If someone does not accept new ideas, they may be left out in our society.
However, it is different when we talk about the attitude of life.
This is called etiqutette = etiquette, that = which is an essential lesson to learn when everyone is children = a child.
I believe that we should follow the etiqutette = etiquette tradition.
Because it is an agreement by = of people to respect each other.
We can't easily break the previous agreemnet = agreement, even though youger want = you want to.

Thank you for reading!

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