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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   tsi06162    µî·ÏÀÏ   2025-07-30
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  *I want to correct quickly so I used dictionary and chat GPT. But, I want more natural expressions like simple words or phrasal verbs. What is the best way to improve my writing skills? Please recommend it to me. Thank you :) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I just thought about what a ¡°happy day¡± looks like for me these days. For me, the happiest time of the week is from Friday evening after work to Saturday evening. On Friday nights, I usually kick back with a drink and watch some fun videos. Last week, I made a highball with whiskey, it was pretty good. I usually go for something light and easy to watch, like YouTube videos or an animated movie. Just something chill to wind down. The next morning, I sleep in and start the day with an iced Americano, then head to the gym. I love that feeling after a good workout, sweaty, a little tired, but feeling lighter and less puffy. In the afternoon, I go to my cello lesson. Since I work full-time during the week, I only practice once a week, but I've improved quite a bit. A few weeks ago, I even played in a small ensemble with other amateur players—it was a lot of fun. These days, I¡¯m working on Breval¡¯s Sonata. Looking back, I guess what really makes me happy is relaxing, eating, and having fun all over again. :)
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*I want to correct quickly so I used dictionary and chat GPT. But, I want more natural expressions like simple words or phrasal verbs.
What is the best way to improve my writing skills? Please recommend it to me. Thank you :)

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I just thought about what a “happy day” looks like for me these days.

For me, the happiest time of the week is from Friday evening after work to Saturday evening.

On Friday nights, I usually kick back with a drink and watch some fun videos.
Last week, I made a highball with whiskey, it = and it was pretty good.

I usually go for something light and easy to watch, like YouTube videos or an animated movie. Just something chill to wind down.

The next morning, I sleep in and start the day with an iced Americano, then head to the gym.
I love that feeling after a good workout, sweaty, a little tired, but feeling = I feel lighter and less puffy.

In the afternoon, I go to my cello lesson.
Since I work full-time during the week, I only practice once a week, but I've improved quite a bit.

A few weeks ago, I even played in a small ensemble with other amateur players—it was a lot of fun.
These days, I’m working on Breval’s Sonata.

Looking back, I guess what really makes me happy is relaxing, eating, and having fun all over again. :)

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