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  Homework:   Do you think single people should be allowed to adopt children? I agree with this statement that single people should be allowed to adopt children. Nowadays, marriage depends on personal choice, and in this case, many single male and female want to feel happiness as a parent. However, it is forbidden to experience the nurturing as a single, as a result, they leave to other countries where this action can be allowed. Therefore, considering the stream of times, it is good to think about the adoption as a single.
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Homework:
 
Do you think single people should be allowed to adopt children?

I agree with this statement that single people should be allowed to adopt children. Nowadays, marriage depends on personal choice, and in this case, many single male and female = males and females want to feel happiness as a parent. However, it is forbidden to experience the nurturing as a single, as a result, they leave to = for other countries where this action can be allowed. Therefore, considering the stream of times, it is good to think about the adoption as a single.

Good day, Nana! Thank you for your diligence in doing your homework. In addition, you can use active voice and simpler structures for clarity. You could also try to expand your knowledge about the usage of prepostions and pluralization. You can do this!

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