How do I balance my need for individuality with my need for a sense of community or belonging?

It's so = a very difficult problem for me because the balance of both is different depending on the situations = situation.
I used to focus on my need for individuality than for = on community in the past.
As I have gorwn = grown up in terms of my perspective and maturity, I efforted to set = put an effort into setting up the balance.
I think that my inner peace is the best for me, even if I gain or lose more than others.
I am selfish but sympathetic, so I feel an discomport = discomfort when someone gain lose = gains or loses.
Additionally, I learned the wisdom of concession by wise people.
The concession is satisfying to me, when = me when I forgive my need for me = needs.
But there is no need to fill in my concession to someone because the reason of = for the concession is just for me.
This way looks like a mental victory, that = which is the essential thing to perserve my inner peace.

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It's a very challenging problem for me because the balance between individuality and community varies depending on the situation. In the past, I tended to focus more on my need for individuality rather than on the community. As I've matured and broadened my perspective, I've made an effort to establish a better balance.

I believe that maintaining my inner peace is the most important thing for me, even if it means I might gain or lose less than others. While I can be somewhat selfish, I also have sympathy for others, and I feel uncomfortable when someone experiences a gain or loss.

I've learned the value of concession from wise individuals. I find that conceding is satisfying when I let go of my own needs. However, I don’t feel the need to justify my concessions to others, as the purpose of conceding is for my own well-being. This approach resembles a mental victory, which is essential for preserving my inner peace.

Thank you for reading! I'm working on composing longer sentences and using vocabulary I've learned in class. See you soon!