Please check grammar.
Before I give you my homework, I said = I would like to say 'Sorry to do  = because I did my homework late.'
I went to church with my family in = last weekend.
I played soccer on Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I played with my sister and father in Chungang . And on Sunday, I played with my church friends = churchmates in Dongyang Middle School .
I never studied = didn't study anything except English.
And I made my mom angry with my sister, because we didn't sleep at 11:40. = My mom got angry at me and at my sister because we slept late.
Last, I won a game ,with family, so I won a prize. = Lastly, I played a game with my family and we won a prize. That is a  Kakao Friends doll.

It's my diary.
Today's learnings things and feeling:
Today, my teacher gave me some tips on how to say like  American’s saying  . This lecture made me more close to native thanyesterday’s Paul . = This lecture taught me to speak like a native American speaker. What sentence made me more close,= Here are the few sayings that I've learned: ‘Happiness has nothing to do with money.’. If I have to say more correct = correctly, I must change it to ‘This lecture made me more upgrade that to believe God than yesterday.’. = 'This lecture made me believe more in God than yesterday.'. Because that sentence is part of that bible meaning. = is biblical.  I must remember this lecture all the days of in my life.

My promise for tomorrow:
Paul, your heart of = for work is good. But sleeping is also good, too. Sleeping helps you to grow up =  your body to grow  in night 10 o’ clock = during 10 pm to dawn 2 o’ clock   = 2 am. And your body secrete every good hormone in that time, too. If you don’t sleep, you are going to hormone imbalance. The heart is go to bad more early. = Your body produces growth hormone in that time. So , If you don not sleep you might have hormone imbalance and heart disease at early age.