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  In my opinion, Taking risks are chance to be a bigger success. When I was a university student, Sometimes I were a team leader. As a team leader, I taked risks because The team performance can be caused by how the team leader leads a team. If The team leader can't set a goal, boost their coworker, It could fail to show their successful performance. But If I did well, Our team could get a good grade and also professor think highly of my efforts. but In Investment side, Taking risk is not always giving a good result. and many gambler loose their money and I think below 0.1% get a jackpot. Someday, we can choose one thing it can be a risk. but We should think it wisely based on a situation and we should not choose it to just get a bigger result.
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In my opinion, Taking risks are chance to be = have a bigger success. When I was a university student, Sometimes I were = There was a time that I became a team leader. As a team leader, I taked risks because of the teams performance can be caused by how the team leader leads a team. If The team leader can't set a goal, boost their = his coworker, It could fail to show their successful performance. But If I did well, Our team could get a good grade and also professor think highly of my efforts. but In the field of Investment side, Taking risk is not always giving a good result. and many gambler loose their money and I think below 0.1%
gets  a jackpot. Someday, we can choose one thing, it can be a risky. but We should think it wisely based on a situation and we should not choose it just to get a bigger result.

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