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  I think any body can be hero, we can find hero very easily, last week I just watched TV, there was a crash. that car took a number of children, they are looks like 4~5 years old at that time many people get out of car and than help them quickly. like this, there are so many hero in the world. every one have a sense of justice each body.
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I think any body =  anybody can be a hero, we can find a hero very easily,
last week(,) I just watched TV, there was a crash.(,) that car took a number of children, they are looks = looked like 4~5 years old(.) (be mindful of the punctuation mark)
at  = At that time(,) many people get = got out of the car and than = then help helped them quickly.
like =  Like this, there are so many hero = heroes in the world. every = Every one have = has a sense of justice. each body.

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~ Well said. Thanks for doing your homework Mr. Jae. Keep on improving! :)

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