I love many thing, first people who is around me like family and friend and so on. = I love many things, first, the people around me, like my family and friends and so on.
because they belive me anytime any where so they are very important person to me. = Because they believe in me anytime, anywhere, so they are very important persons to me.
second money, I want to have a many thing for example car, house, and so on, = Second, money. I want to own many things, like car, house and so on.
also when I want to get a something I have to pay that and when I make a fimily they need a lot of item so before encounter this situation I just want to save money if I can  = Also, when I want to get something, I have to pay for it. And when I make a family, we have to meet our needs. Before I get married, I want to save money first.

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~ Thank you so much for doing your homework Mr. Jae. Just keep on reaching your goals! You're great. Stay optimistic!