제 목   What influences you to make good choices?    상 태  
   작성자   gptn7724    등록일   2016-12-07
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  There're so many things to make good choices for me. I would refer to one thing to get me to be influenced. The first thing is my family, especially my a brother in low. He is 35 year olds and working at financial company charging in real estate. To tell the truth, he was graduated the same university with me and his character is very similar with me comparing with my sister. So If I get in the trouble, I request him to consult concerning the problem. then he instruct me with some wise solutions. I certainly sure that I relied on his opinion and also feel thankful with him. Until this, was my first writing homework. and I hope a lot of errors are corrected from your hands. Thanks for your help. have a good day^^
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There're so many things that influences me to make good choices for me.
I would refer to one thing to get me to be influenced. = I would refer to one thing that influenced me the most. 
The first thing is my family, especially my a brother in low = law.
He is 35 year olds and he's working at in a financial company charging in real estate financial company.
To tell you the truth, he was graduated in the same university with me and his character is very similar with me comparing with my sister.
So If = whenever I get in the trouble, I request him to consult him concerning the = my problem.
then = Then he will instruct me with some wise solutions or decisions.
I = I'm certainly sure that I relied = rely on his opinion and I also feel thankful with = to him.

Until this, was = This is my first writing homework.
and I hope a lot of errors are corrected from your hands.
Thanks for your help. have = Have a good day^^

 

 

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