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Do you think career success or personal happiness is more important? Support your opinion with reasons and examples.

I think personal happiness is more impotrtant than career success.
I can say confidently that the reason, that = which is the personal happiness, includes ~~the~~ career success.
My personality pursue = pursues a stable type and comfort, so I am not a passionate person.
That's why I don't have an interest about success in = in being successful in my carrer, and I just want to live happily with my family.
I think that achieving career success purposes = is the purpose of gaining personal happiness.
Even though we want to our happiness eventually, the host is overturned sometimes.
A = An example is missing our health, family, or something important when we immerse ourself = ourselves in work.
Happineess is a very subjective thing, so only I can protect my happiness.
The way to protect is many = There are many ways to protect my happiness, including career success, a beautiful body, healthy mental, strong relationship, and = a healthy mind, a strong relationship, etc.
I haven't put career success to = as my best thing until now, because there are a lots of reason I say = now because I have a lot of reasons.

Thank you for reading. Happy weekend!

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I think personal happiness is more important than career success. I believe personal happiness is most important, and for me, career success is only one part of that happiness.
I like stability and comfort, so I am not a very passionate person. That's why I don't have an interest in being successful in my career, and I just want to live happily with my family.
I believe career success is just one way to achieve personal happiness, not the ultimate goal. However, sometimes people lose sight of personal happiness while focusing too much on work. For example, we might lose our health, family, or other important things if we focus too much on work. Happiness is a very subjective thing, so only I can protect my happiness. There are many ways to keep myself happy, like doing well at work, staying healthy, having a good mind, and having strong relationships. I have not made career success my top priority so far because of all these reasons.